I, We, They
Which Voice Is Most Effective for Your Web Site
Your Web site is your first conversation with your prospective clients. How are you going to talk to them?
The first person voices-I
and we-come across as friendly and informal. These words subtly convey
the message "I am on your side" and "We are in this together." When you
are helping people with highly sensitive issues, like divorce, estate
planning, and criminal defense, the first person voice immediately
begins to build a trusting, personal relationship.
On the other hand,
sometimes you really can have too much of a good thing when that
informal "I" begins to sound self-centered and boastful and "we" takes
on the air of a member of the royal family.
The third person voice-they-is
formal, distant, impersonal and therefore some people feel it is more
"professional." Please don't equate professional with impersonal. There
are many ways to convey a professional demeanor without resorting to
impersonal.
On the other hand, in some locations and for
some types of law practices, formal is very much the tone you want to
convey. Municipal law, administrative law, appellate law, insurance
defense, business litigation-these types of practices often benefit
from a very formal tone and a third person voice.
Difficult choices
Which
voice should you choose if your law firm handles a dozen different
practice areas, serving both businesses and individuals? Should you
have different voices for different pages, depending upon the needs of
your audience?
Absolutely not; stick with one voice
across your site and choose a voice that matches the tone of your firm.
After all, your Web site is a reflection of your law firm. When you
choose a formal or a personal tone, you are preparing your prospective
clients for what they will encounter when they visit your office and
get to know you. Be yourself.
The dreaded "I" word
Quite often I hear from solo practitioners who are afraid to use the "I" word. They inevitably give me three reasons:
1) It doesn't sound professional (not true, any voice can sound professional)
2) It sounds self-centered (that's possible, but it needn't be the case)
3) They don't want Web site visitors to think they are a solo practitioner
This last one is a real problem.
Facts
are facts. If you are a solo practitioner, it's an ethical violation to
suggest otherwise. Don't try to hide behind a vague "they." Your
attorney profile page is only going to show one attorney so you're not
going to fool anyone.
My advice is to take a powerful position.
Speak with a firm, singular voice. Solo practitioners can do things
lawyers in larger firms can't do. Make the most of that with effective
service statements. When you say, "I protect your interests. I'm here
for you," that's the strongest statement a lawyer can make to a client.
It's the real message your clients want to hear.
Wrapping up the pronouns
So what voice will be the most effective for your site and your clients? You choose. Just remember to:
• Get the facts straight-the right voice for the number of attorneys in your firm
• Get your community straight-formal or down home, either can work
• Get the client straight-how much trust do you need to build right from the start
Watch for more issues to consider when planning your law firm Web site
- The Path to Greatness: Taking your visitors from curious to calling
- Enough or Too much: The art of being informational
- Enough or Too Much - Redux: Creating a Mix of Value-Added Pages
- Small Can Be Beautiful: A small Web site can get big results
- And On This Side of the Ring: Is it possible to reach conflicting audiences with one Web site?
Leslie MacKenzie